Re: 2A-022 -Bella

[Sub Tutor 3]

The title of this book is "The Grand Canyon."

Arizona is located in the United States and is one of the Seven Wonders of the Natural World. The Grand Canyon attracts nearly five million people from across the globe every year. Hikers are often speechless because of its incredible size and colors. The Canyon's layers of rocks show over 2000 million years of history. Its steep sides were carved by the Colorado River about 6 million years ago. The first Europeans to set eyes on the Grand Canyon were Spanish explorers. They were searching for the rumored "Seven Cities of Gold." The animal figurines made from split twigs were discovered inside the caves. Rafting on the Colorado River and biking along the rim are popular activities. After reading this book, I want to go to the Grand Canyon.

Score: B-

Tips:

• Try to add more facts or interesting information about the Grand Canyon to make it more engaging.
• Ensure all proper nouns are capitalized and use correct verb tenses consistently.

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