Re: 2A022David

[Sub Tutor 3]

The title of this book is The Grand Canyon. Located in the United States, Arizona is home to one of the seven wonders of the natural world. Canyons are formed over millions of years by river rain, and wind. The first Europeans to set eyes on the Grand Canyon were Spanish explorers in 1540. The Grand Canyon is not only known for its great climbing trails and breathtaking views. In 1966, animal figurines made from split twigs were discovered inside caves at the Grand Canyon. At the end of a tiring trip, families can take the Grand Canyon Railway. You should watch the caboose. I think this book is interesting.

Grade: B

Tips:

• Conclusion: Brief and expresses your opinion, but adding a summary of key points from the book would strengthen it.
• Content: Adding more descriptive details or interesting facts about the Grand Canyon would make the essay more engaging and informative.

[Teacher1]

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