Re: 2A 022 (Alexander)

[Sub Tutor 3]

The title of this book is The Grand Canyon.

Located in the United States, Arizona is home to one of the Seven Wonders of the Natural World. The Grand Canyon attracts nearly five million people from all across the globe every year. The first Europeans to set eyes on the Grand Canyon were Spanish explorers in 1540. The Grand Canyon isn't only known for its great hiking trails and breathtaking cliff views. Bald eagles, mountain lions, elks, and black widow spiders are among the many different species that roam the red rocks. In 1966, animal figurines made from split twigs were discovered inside caves at the Grand Canyon. Gazing at the picturesque landscape isn't the only thing to do at the Grand Canyon.

Grade: A-

Tips:

• Conclusion: The last sentence could be expanded to mention a few other activities available at the Grand Canyon to provide a stronger ending.
• Content: Overall, the content is strong and informative, with interesting details about wildlife and historical findings. Adding a brief summary of why the Grand Canyon is worth visiting at the end would enhance the conclusion.