Re: Niagara Falls 2A-021(Bella)

[Teacher1]

The title of this book is "Niagara Falls". Niagara Falls is shared by two countries, ̶a̶r̶e̶ America and Canada. Its name means "the strait" or "the neck" because it straddles the Canada-United States international border ̶i̶n̶ ̶b̶o̶t̶h̶ in the province of Ontario. Niagara Falls consists of three waterfalls**:** the American Falls, the Bridal Veil Falls, and the Horseshoe Falls. The famous scientist**,** Nikola Tesla, designed the first hydroelectric power plant at Niagara Falls. While Niagara Falls is known for breathtaking scenery and impressive dimensions, it is also famous for daredevil stunts**;** the first person to go over the falls was a 63-year**-old school teacher,** and the second person was Bobby Leach. Niagara Falls has long been a tourist favorite for many reasons. Famous writers like Mark Twain and Charles Dickens had visited Niagara Falls to write about it. It has also been a site for movies and TV shows**;** it also provides a source of entertainment. I think this book is wonderful.

Grade: B

Tips)

• Check your spelling carefully (countries, dimensions, reasons).
• Use proper capitalization for names and places.
• Add punctuation like colons and semicolons to separate ideas.
• Provide more details about the daredevil stunts and why they're famous.
• Consider adding more personal thoughts about what you learned from the book.