Re: 1C 216 Yulia

[Teacher1]

The title of this book is "Milly, Molly and Salty Sam." Salty Sam had a dinghy and a bag full of oranges. Milly and Molly wanted to go with Salty Sam. Salty Sam a̶g̶r̶e̶e̶ agreed. Milly and Molly were in his dinghy and p̶e̶e̶l̶ peeled oranges while Salty Sam was catching fishes. Suddenly the little dolphin appeared. Milly and Molly gave oranges to the dolphin. Milly and Molly were quiet during Salty Sam was rowing them home. Milly and Molly were quiet at their home. The next day, Milly and Molly were in his d̶i̶n̶g̶h̶y̶ dinghy and p̶e̶e̶l̶ peeled oranges while Salty Sam was catching fishes. A̶n̶d̶ The dolphin appeared again. Milly and Molly gave oranges again. A̶n̶d̶ Milly and Molly continued peeling oranges. Dolphin t̶h̶a̶n̶k̶s̶ thanked Milly, Molly and Salty Sam.

Score: B+

Tips)

1. 쉼표(,) 뒤에는 빈칸을 넣어요!
2. 과거 이야기는 과거형으로 써요! (agree → agreed)
3. 'And'로 문장을 시작하지 말고 바로 시작해요!
4. 돌고래가 오렌지를 받고 어떤 표정을 지었는지 써보면 어떨까요?
5. 단어는 띄어 써요! (hisdinghy → his dinghy)