Sunday, November 11, 2007
Title : Shopping mall above (go shopping)
I went to the shopping mall which(whose) name is Lotte Mart today with my fater(father).
When we arrived at the shopping mall , above all we ate the launch(lunch).
It was over two o'clock , so I was hungry.
I ordeded(ordered) rice which involves(includes) many vegetables, sliced meat, and others(some other things).
And my father ordered a breaded pork cutlet of shirmp.
We diveded(divided) each one's meal so I was able to eat my father's meat(meal) and mine.
It was so delicious and abundant(enough for me). I ate the food clearly(cleanly).
After eating I was very full. Then we went to the first floor.
There were many vegetables, fish, meat, cookies, and so one(on).
I wanted to buy all the things that were in this floor. But it was just my desire.
We bought a lot of food. Especially we bought milk as many as nine packs.
You maybe(may) say 'Wow' However(however) I have seven family members so it is nothing(it is not enough for my family).
It will disapper(disappear) just one week.
By the way we also bought the cholcolate(chocolate) which prays success in an examination for my old(older) sister.
And my father gave me a present that is(was) a white and cute cap.
I was so thank-you(thankful). Finally today was November 11th, 'Pe Pe Ro Day'. we(We) bought many packs of Pe Pe Ro('Pe Pe Ro').
While father drove his cars(car) a little fast because we had to arrive at home until 5 o'clock,
I slept in the car. Because I was so tired today.
I wasn't able to shop with(able to go shopping with) my fater(father) for a long time , It was happier(I was very happy).
I went to the shopping mall which(who) name is Lotte Mart today with my fater(father).
When we arrived at the shopping mall , above all we ate the launch(lunch).
It was over two o'clock , so I was hungry.
I ordeded(ordered) rice which involves(includes) many vegetables, sliced meat, and others(some other things).
And my father ordered a breaded pork cutlet of shirmp.
We diveded(divided) each one's meal so I was able to eat my father's meat(meal) and mine.
It was so delicious and abundant(enough for me). I ate the food clearly(cleanly).
After eating I was very full. Then we went to the first floor.
There were many vegetables, fish, meat, cookies, and so one(on).
I wanted to buy all the things that were in this floor. But it was just my desire.
We bought a lot of food. Especially we bought milk as many as nine packs.
You maybe(may) say 'Wow' However(however) I have seven family members so it is nothing(it is not enough for my family).
It will disapper(disappear) just one week.
By the way we also bought the cholcolate(chocolate) which prays success in an examination for my old(older) sister.
And my father gave me a present that is(was) a white and cute cap.
I was so thank-you(thankful). Finally today was November 11th, 'Pe Pe Ro Day'. we(We) bought many packs of Pe Pe Ro('Pe Pe Ro').
While father drove his cars(car) a little fast because we had to arrive at home until 5 o'clock,
I slept in the car. Because I was so tired today.
I wasn't able to shop with(able to go shopping with) my fater(father) for a long time , It was happier(I was very happy).
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