<p>The story is "Milly, Molly and Salty Sam." Salty Sam had a dinghy and a bag full of oranges. Milly and Molly sat at the s̶a̶t̶ ̶a̶t̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ stern peeling oranges while Salty Sam sat at the bow catching fish. Suddenly the dolphin appeared from nowhere. Salty Sam had a thousand oranges. That night a storm blew up and s̶p̶i̶l̶l̶e̶d̶ spilled the oranges. Milly and Molly's c̶a̶t̶c̶h̶ caught some oranges. Finally Milly and Molly c̶a̶t̶c̶h̶ caught the oranges. U̶n̶t̶i̶l̶ ̶O̶n̶e̶ One day, the little dolphin said "Thank you!" The story is good.</p><p>Score: B-</p><p>Tips)</p><ol style="list-style-type: decimal;" data-ke-list-type="decimal"><li>쉼표(,) 뒤에는 빈칸을 넣어요!</li><li>과거 이야기는 과거형으로 써요! (catch → caught)</li><li>문장과 문장 사이에 빈칸을 넣어요!</li><li>폭풍이 얼마나 무서웠는지 설명해보면 어떨까요?</li><li>이야기가 왜 좋았는지 이유도 써보면 좋겠어요!</li></ol>
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