Re: Max and Ruby-Sung yeon

[Teacher Winget]

Max and Ruby at the Bunny Scouts' Fair

One special day, Max and Ruby went to the Bunny Scouts' fair.

When they arrived, there were many things to do. Among them, Max wanted to ride the Rocket Racer. But he didn't meet their standard height requirement.

Then, they went to "Rosalinda’s Ring Toss." Max made a goal with the ring, which nobody else could toss successfully.

He received a pair of shoes and wore them to go to the Rocket Racer again. This time, he reached the height requirement, but Ruby still didn't allow him to ride.

Next, they went to "Huffington’s Magic Show." Max wore a magic hat just like Huffington always wore. Then, he went to the Rocket Racer again.

This time, he met Mr. Piazza, who allowed him to take a special extra ride.

Max felt happy, and Ruby and Louise felt amazed.

I wonder what happened to the shoes that Max received.

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Score: B+

Tips)

1. "wnt" → "went" (철자가 틀렸어요! 조심해서 써보세요.)
2. "didn't reach" → "didn't meet" (높이에 도달하지 못했다는 의미보다는, "기준에 맞지 않았다"라는 뜻으로 고치는 게 자연스러워요!)
3. "Roslanda's ring toss" → "Rosalinda’s Ring Toss" (이름이 틀렸어요! 이름은 정확하게 써야 해요.)
4. "Max breaked down the cans" → "Max knocked down the cans" (breaked는 틀린 표현이에요! "knocked down"이 더 자연스러워요.)
5. "Max interested of scarecrow's candies" → "Max was interested in the scarecrow's candies" (관심이 있다는 표현은 "be interested in"을 사용해요!)