The title of this story is "The Story of the Taj Mahal."
Today I'm going to talk about the Taj Mahal. Prince Khurram fell in love with his future wife.
When they were married, the prince gave his bride a new name, Mumtaz Mahal.
They were happy, but the war broke out. In the battlefield, she gave birth and passed away. The King Jahan grieved for days. And he decided to build the Taj Mahal using the finest materials. The tomb took twelve years to complete. Today it means the king's love for his wife.
I think it was is a beautiful story.
Grade: A-
Tips:
- Add "using" after "build the Taj Mahal."
- Use "is" instead of "was" for the last sentence.