Re: 2A 238 - Ethan

[Teacher1]

The title of this story is "The Plant That Can Drink Up a Pond."

Moss is soft and spread spreads around glass grass, but it isn't grass, and it grow grows on the rocks.

Moss can soak up the water, so pioneer pioneers used it to drank drink up the raindrops.

Soft moss can be growing grow close to damp place damp places.

People used it to make soft mattresses.

The biggest mosses grow hiding place grow hiding places for a little mouse.

Moss is so thirsty, and mountain mosses didn't don’t drink up snow in the spring time .

I think this book is interesting because I learned information about mosses.

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Score: B

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Tips)

• spread → spreads / grow → grows: moss는 단수니까 -s를 붙여요.
• glass → grass: *glass(유리)*와 *grass(풀)*은 달라요!
• pioneer → pioneers: 여러 명이니까 복수형으로 써요.
• drank → drink: 문장 시제가 과거가 아니니까 drink 사용.
• grow → grow: can grow처럼 조동사 뒤엔 동사 원형 써요.
• place → places: 여러 장소니까 복수형이 필요해요.
• grow hiding place → grow hiding places: 복수형 + 문장 자연스럽게 고치기
• didn't drink → don’t drink: 지금도 그런 사실이면 현재형으로 써야 해요!