Hello lovely Mac J
I am very happy and honor to see you in this class every time. I found one your huge progress. Smiling on the stage is become natural. Also, your smile is now a matchless beauty.
In this time, I want to something for your better performance.
First, some words were unclear:
Poorest, ancient, role (please check this at M-W.com)
Second, your body was too much moved inefficiently.
Third, you are often not only missed article but also confused the plural and the singular.
For the better presentation, let’s practice read book or listen to audio file neatly so that not to make any single mistakes.
Thank you for make a presentation again.
If you cannot understand or confused, feel free to come and ask me.