<p>The title of this book is "<b>Mount Everest</b>".</p><p>The giant formation holds thirty-two of the tallest peaks in the world, including the highest peak on Earth above sea level, <b>Mount Everest</b>. Mount Everest is the highest elevation on Earth. The climbers can see Tibet, India, and Nepal, but this mountain isn't known as "Everst" to everyone. Around <b>8,000 meters</b> up Mount Everest, it's called the "<b>Death Zone</b>". In <b>2010</b>, experienced mountaineers helped a thirteen-year-old boy <b>climb to the top</b>. He was one of the youngest people <b>to climb</b> the world's highest mountain.</p><p>I like the part about "<b>one of the youngest to climb the world's highest mountain</b>" because it sounds amazing!</p><p><b>Grade: B+</b></p><p><b>Tips)</b></p><ul style="list-style-type: disc;" data-ke-list-type="disc"><li>Make sure to spell "Everest" correctly throughout the text.</li><li>Use consistent grammar and punctuation, especially with plurals and possessives.</li><li>Provide a bit more detail about Mount Everest's location and significance.</li></ul>
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