Hello, Moojukers. This is Rex of “Shall We
Design”.
First of all, we’d like to say “Thank you”
to all of Moojukers who offered a prayer for our team and congratulated us on
winning the first prize. Without the help of the teachers in Moojuk including
Tcho and Terry and the words of encouragement that Moojukers gave to us, we
could not have achieved this prize.
We have been asked by a number of Moojukers
for uploading our video clips and scripts over the past few days. The fact that
many paid attention to our affairs pleased us a lot. So, we are now uploading
the essay and scripts that we have written in the process of preparation and
the video clips of us delivering our presentation in semi-final and final round
though they humble us to some extent. We hope these attachments can serve the
purpose of helping Moojukers in their studies.
Final Draft on Urban renewal.docx
During the summer campus in my university, for the final essay in the course named Presentation and Writing Skills, I have written an essay on urban renewal before working on the actual presentation script.
[Shall We Design]PT Script 예선.docx
The PT script that enables us to advance to the semi-final round was too much written-form and filled with difficult vocabularies. After deciding to go ahead with two-presenter system, recommended by Tcho and Terry, we put efforts in revising the script into more dialogue form with easier vocabularies.
[Shall We Design]PT Script for semi-final.docx
Semi-Final
Final
Herald editor in chief, one of the judges, emphasize the importance of coherence and logic. He said a lot of teams had logical fallacies in their presentations. He further commented that as using too many vague and abstract concepts, some presenters failed to convey their messages to the audience. A professor from Samsung Art and Design Institute mentioned that ideas and analyses were great but new creative ideas were rarely found throughout the contest.
The below are the video clips of the other teams who made the final round with us.
Second Prize [Re-present]
Third Prize [Think Twice]
Fourth [Philozign]
As you see, many of participants didn't memorize their scripts fully. Definitely, our attitude and mindset are strikingly different from others.
A more detailed account about the preparation and tournament will be later provided via different media.
Again, our team would like to extend our gratitude to every single teacher in moojuk and those who have encouraged us to perform the best.
We love Moojuk.
We believe in Moojuk.
Moojuk Forever.
첫댓글 ...! I'm speechless.
I'm astonished and amazed by your presentation. Honestly, I lost track of time for around 12 min. !! :)
Thank you for giving me an opportunity to watch your outcome achieved with your blood, toil, tears, and sweat.
Actually..there is not much more to say; I am so proud of you! :>
CONGRATS!!!!
-Holly
Wow..!! Congratulations 'Shall We Design', Rex, James, Carine and Leslie !
I am very appreciated that you made amazing result. Also, thank you for sharing it to us. :)
Congratulations !!!!!!! -Brian
CONGRATULATIONS!
Your presentaiton made me wow!
I am realy grateful for your efforts. You are the pride fo Moojuck as well as Busan!
-Drew
How amazing!!!!! Your presentation and efforts moved me to tears TT
Thanks so much for your sharing it !!
I'd like to extend to you my heartiest congratulations :)
Thank you again!!
-Mia
Thank you for your kindness and your efforts.
With this precious information of your presentation, I cannot open jaw bigger than now.
It's just... amazing. I could see your sweats and tears in your script and presentation, and you deserve to get the sweetest fruit.
Cogratulations and thank you for sharing!!
-Ann