Re: 2A 023 - Felix

[Sub Tutor 3]

Sixty million years ago, the tectotic tectonic plate beneath india India began to move towards the Eurasian Plate and over time created the Himalaya mountain range. It is became the Mount Everest. This movement formed Mount Everest. Mount Everest is reaching reaches 8,849 meters. It is the size of sixteen Lotte Towers put together. On May 29th, 1953, Edmund Hillary and Tenzing Norgay became the first known climbers to conquer this mountain. Also, around 8,000 meters up Mount Everest, climbers enter what is known as the "Death Zone." It has This zone has low oxygen and makes it difficult to breathe. In 2010, these experienced mountaineers helped a thirteen-yearsyear-old boy with his climb to the top. He became one of the youngest climbers.

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Grade: B+

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Tips:

1. Capitalize proper nouns like "India."
2. Make sure your sentences are clear and logical, like "This movement formed Mount Everest."
3. Use the correct verb forms, like "reaches" instead of "is reaching."