[Corrected] My friend's wedding ceremony

[Jim Lee]

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A wedding ceremony for my best friend who is living in Chang won took place yesterday. I took a bus around 7 o’clock in the morning with my friends. It took at least 5 hours to go. As she and her future husband are catholic, this ceremony happened in Cathedral. Although I attended at wedding ceremony in cathedrals, it seemed to me nicer and more solemn. The weather couldn’t be better. It was wonderful. The sky was high without any cloud and the daylight was very warm. She picked up well her dress, and make-up was well done. We took pictures together and we celebrated her family and future husband. As my friend is good and sincere, I have been sure that she would find the best man. I’m not doubtful that he is that person who my friend has been waiting for. My friends and me who didn’t yet marry envied her. She found her half for the life. More over, she can go to honey moon for almost 1 week. I envied this 1 week’s holiday. It’s not possible to take a rest for the salary man like her !!! A large number of men and women meet and get married easily. However, a large number of men and women are looking for one’s half who is also looking for somewhere. I feel pity for men and women who have to see each other with a view to marriage. Why do we have to marry ? Why do they think that a person who reaches the suitable age have to marry ? I was very tired with a long journey. We had to stay in bus for almost 10 hours ! This morning, my friend took a plane for Philippine's small island.	A wedding ceremony of for my best friend who is now living in Chang won took place yesterday. I took a bus around 7 o’clock in the morning with my friends. It took at least about 5 hours to geto there. As she and her future husband are cCatholics, this ceremony happened in a Cathedral. Although I had attended at wedding ceremony in cathedrals before, it seemed to me that this place was nicer and more solemn. The weather couldn’t have been better. It was wonderful. The sky was high without any cloud and the daylight was very warm. She picked up well her dress well, and her make-up was well done. We took pictures together and we celebrated with her family and future husband. As my friend is good and sincere, I have been sure that she would find the best man. I’m not doubtful that he is that person who my friend has been waiting for. My friends and I me who weren’t didn’t yet marriedy envied her. She found her half for her the life. More over, she can go to a honey moon for almost 1 week. I envied this 1 week’s holiday. It’s not possible to take a rest like that for an the salary man office worker like her !!! A large number of men and women meet and get married easily. However, a large number of men and women are looking for their mates one’s half and can’t find the right person who is also looking for somewhere. I feel pity for men and women who have to see each other with a view to marriage. Why do we have to marry ? Why do they think that a person who reaches the suitable age hasve to marry ? I was very tired with a long journey. We had to stay in the bus for almost 10 hours ! This morning, my friend took a plane for a small island in the Philippines's small island.
Comment: Excellent! Personal Comment: I guess you are at an age where all your friends are getting married.  You’re writing about marriage a lot these days.