If you were obese, what would you do? Why? [T.Ceilrous]
At
first I will go diet.
Because
if I am obesity I can’t training like exercise.
And
I can’t run and I have very many problems.
So,
if I am obesity I will go diet at first.
On
second, I will go to obesity clinic.
I
want to diet but I don’t know how to diet.
So
on second, I will go to obesity clinic or obesity center
At
first, I will go on a diet because if I am obese I can’t undergo
some training such as doing some exercise, I can’t run and I
have a lot of problems in physical, emotional and etc.
So,
if I am obese I will go on a diet at first.
Second,
I will go to the obesity clinic.
I
want to diet but I don’t know how to do the effective way of dieting.
So,
that’s the second thing I must do in order to have a safe diet because the
doctor knows what’s best for dieting. Diet is dangerous when you’re abusively
doing it. Sometimes it can cause death.
Hi!!!
Very Good!! Dieting is hard especially when
it’s against your will. Anyway, I’ve noticed some inappropriate words and you
interchange the subject verb agreement so please check my correction above and
study why I have to change your sentences. Next time, make sure to write longer
writing. You can do it. Good luck!!!!