Re: 김동휘 주말 과제

[Teacher1]

Today's story is "Caillou Goes to Work."

Caillou exited was excited because caillou go he went to mom's company his mom's company.

and And Caillou drow drew a family picture.

and Then Caillou called to his father.

afther After that, Caillou and mom ate for lunch his mom ate lunch.

and caillou go back to home Then Caillou went back home.

Score: C+

Tips)

1. "To day" → "Today's"처럼 올바르게 써야 해요.
2. "exited" → "was excited"로 바꿔야 뜻이 맞아요.
3. "caillou go" → "he went"로 시제를 맞춰야 해요.
4. "drow" → "drew"가 올바른 과거형이에요.
5. "called to his father" → "called his father"처럼 "to"는 필요 없어요.
6. "afther" → "After that"로 고쳐야 맞아요.
7. "ate for lunch" → "ate lunch"처럼 "for" 없이 써야 해요.
8. "go back to home" → "went back home"이 올바른 표현이에요. "to home"은 쓰지 않아요.