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<P style="FONT-SIZE: 20px; MARGIN: 0px; COLOR: #000000; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LINE-HEIGHT: 32px; FONT-FAMILY: '바탕'; TEXT-ALIGN: justify"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 20px; COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 32px; FONT-FAMILY: '바탕'; TEXT-ALIGN: justify">I was very happy on Sunday because I promised to eat buffet during see Wedding Ceremony in Seoul. First I got up at ten o'clock because I had to go to Mathematics Institute. I studied very hard because I didn't do well Mathematics so I study hard more than when I was Middle School student. And I came back my house at two o'clock. I want to go to Seoul very fast because my younger sister had to go to GulMaek Educational Institute. My younger sister studied so long time on weekdays but on Sunday she don't study so long time. So she came back our house at 4 o'clock. </SPAN></P>
<P style="FONT-SIZE: 20px; MARGIN: 0px; COLOR: #000000; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LINE-HEIGHT: 32px; FONT-FAMILY: '바탕'; TEXT-ALIGN: justify"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 20px; COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 32px; FONT-FAMILY: '바탕'; TEXT-ALIGN: justify">First Song-hee, my younger sister and I rode my father's car and my father rode us Bupyeong station. We bought three subway tickets. My younger sister was Elementary School student so she bought three subway tickets. So we bought subway tickets very cheap. And I got changes and I drunk soda by changes. We met brother Young-Dae and Young-Woo before we entered the subway door. So we went to Seoul Embassador hotel with brothers. We have to pass twenty-six railroad stations. So I was very tired but I didn't sleep in subway because I expected buffet very much. </SPAN></P>
<P style="FONT-SIZE: 20px; MARGIN: 0px; COLOR: #000000; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LINE-HEIGHT: 32px; FONT-FAMILY: '바탕'; TEXT-ALIGN: justify"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 20px; COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 32px; FONT-FAMILY: '바탕'; TEXT-ALIGN: justify">I and our group arrived at Dong-Kuk university entrance subway station. And I met our leading teacher at sixth gate. We went to Embassador hotel on foot for ten minutes. We ate deep-fried fork, 유산슬, shrimps and rice cakes which were delicious and wonderful. But that dishes amount were very small so I was still hungry. So our leading teacher lead us to Bul-Dak eating house. First that was tasty but after ate five pieces which were very hot and spicy. So I drunk water and coke very much. We told about today's Wedding Ceremony which was luxury and beautiful in English and Japanese. Each students told about what is the best scenes. I told about candle scenes. </SPAN></P>
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첫댓글 Charles 님 맛있으셨겠네여.. 뭐 틀린게 있다면 I drunk water-I drank water 아니라면 죄송 그리고 이건 기사보단 일기에 쓰시면 더 자연스러울 것 같습니다.
ㅋㅋㅋ 근데 영우가 아니라 우경이에요!! ㅋㅋㅋ
훔 그런데 이글 자체가 기사보다는 일기쪽의 느낌이 더 오네요 ㅋ 좀더 객관적인 요소가 더 들어가야될듯 그리고 앞에 만나서 가는 내용을 간략하게 줄이고 결혼식을 중앙으로 세워서 결혼식의 무엇을 중점으로 쓰고싶은가를 정해서 그것에 따라 집중적으로 쓰는게 좋겠네요
예를들면 저같은경우에는 예전의 결혼식과 달라진 모습을 비교해서 썼거든요 ㅋ 일어기사란에 있습니다. ㅋ 근데 이글에는 기사라고하기에는 집중력이 좀 떨어지네요 글의 내용전개나 표현등은 정말 좋네요 ㅋ
하하;; 저는 결혼식의 문제점이라고해서 결혼할때 너무 사치스럽게 돈을 많이 쓴다 라는 등의 기사를 썼는데,,,,,,,,하하하;; 저만 맨날 부정적인 듯한 기사를...♥
왜 모든 분들이 luxurious 를 안쓰시는 걸까..... 대략 낭패
Also you'd better write about your school life. Because many students want to study at specialized schools.