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<td width=290 valign=top class="Normal"> <p align="center" style='line-height:14.0pt;'><strong><font size="3" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"><span
lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Your writing</span></font></strong></p></td>
<td width=290 valign=top class="Normal"> <p align="center" style='line-height:14.0pt;'><strong><font size="3" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"><span
lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>My corrections </span></font></strong></p></td>
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<td width=290 valign=top class="Normal"> <p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><font size="3" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"><span
lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>When I was a child, I
was taught to write a daily in the night. <br>
But I am about to break this <span class=SpellE>pricipal</span>^^. I
guess, I won't be able to leave my daily tonight because of my fixed
schedule. <br>
As you may know, I have <span class=GramE>a</span> English Speaking
meeting twice a week. <br>
Usually, it is held on TUS, SAT unless the time is announced in <span
class=SpellE>advence</span>. I used to go the private language <span
class=SpellE>school.I</span> guess that my group is better than the school in
terms of a abilities of consisted member and the chance of speaking
as <span
class=SpellE>well<span class=GramE>..</span>We</span> are supposed to see a
firework which is sponsored by Korea Tourism <span class=SpellE>Assocoation</span>.
<span class=GramE>the</span> fireworks are arranged with a couple of
week, but I don't really <span class=SpellE>konw</span> how many weeks
it is continued. One thing I am sure about is that today's event will
be <span
class=SpellE>organised</span> by </span><st1:country-region><span
lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Australia</span></st1:country-region><span
lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>, one more tip is that
the following week's firework will be hosted by our proud </span><st1:country-region><span
lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Korea</span></st1:country-region><span
lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>^^. <br>
<span class=GramE>sound</span> awesome, doesn't it? This is a once-a
year chance, so why don't you join the event, JIM? I am going to re-write
about firework after <span class=SpellE>joinning</span> the event^^
You have a joyful weekend^^ <br>
bless you guys^^</span></font></p></td>
<td width=290 valign=top class="Normal"> <p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><font size="3" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"><span
lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>When I was a child, I
was taught to write a daily in the night. <br>
But I am about to break this pri<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성"
datetime="2003-10-04T10:37"><font color="#0000FF">n</font></ins></span>cipal^^.
I guess, I won't be able to leave my daily tonight because of my fixed
schedule. <br>
As you may know, I have a<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성"
datetime="2003-10-04T10:37"><font color="#0000FF">n</font></ins></span> English
Speaking meeting twice a week. <br>
Usually, it is held on TUS, SAT unless the time is announced in adv<span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:37"><font color="#0000FF">a</font></ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:37">e</del></span>nce.
I used to go the private language school.<span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:37"> </ins></span>I guess that my
group is better than the <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성"
datetime="2003-10-04T10:37"><font color="#0000FF">public</font> </ins></span>school<span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:37"><font color="#0000FF">s</font></ins></span>
in terms of <span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:38">a </del></span>abilities
of <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:38">consisted
</del></span>member<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성"
datetime="2003-10-04T10:38"><font color="#0000FF">s</font></ins></span> and
the chance of speaking as well.<span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:38">.</del></span><span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:38"> </ins></span>We
are supposed to see a firework which is sponsored by <span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:38"><font color="#0000FF">the</font>
</ins></span>Korea Tourism Assoc<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:38"><font color="#0000FF">i</font></ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:38">o</del></span>ation.
<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:38">T</ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:38">t</del></span>he
fireworks <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성"
datetime="2003-10-04T10:38"><font color="#0000FF">is</font></ins></span><span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:38">are</del></span> <span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:38"><font color="#0000FF">scheduled
for</font> </ins></span><span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:이진성"
datetime="2003-10-04T10:39">arranged with </del></span>a couple of week<span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:39">s</ins></span>,
but I don't really k<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성"
datetime="2003-10-04T10:39"><font color="#0000FF">n</font></ins></span>o<span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:39">n</del></span>w how many weeks
it <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:39"><font color="#0000FF">will
be</font></ins></span><span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:이진성"
datetime="2003-10-04T10:39">is</del></span> continued. One thing I am sure about
is that today's event will be organi<span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:39"><font color="#0000FF">z</font></ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:39">s</del></span>ed
by </span><st1:country-region><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:
11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Australia</span></st1:country-region><span
lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'><span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:39"><font color="#0000FF">.</font></ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:39">,</del></span>
<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:39"> <font color="#0000FF">O</font></ins></span><span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:39">o</del></span>ne more tip is that
the following week's firework will be hosted by our proud </span><st1:country-region><span
lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Korea</span></st1:country-region><span
lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>^^. <br>
<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:40"><font color="#0000FF">S</font></ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:40">s</del></span>ound
awesome, doesn't it? This is <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:이진성"
datetime="2003-10-04T10:40">a </del></span>once-a year chance, so why don't
you <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:40"><font color="#0000FF">go
to</font></ins></span><span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:이진성"
datetime="2003-10-04T10:40">join</del></span> the event, JIM? I am going to
re-write about firework after join<span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:이진성"
datetime="2003-10-04T10:40">n</del></span>ing the event^^ You have a joyful
weekend^^ <br>
<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:40"><font color="#0000FF">B</font></ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:이진성" datetime="2003-10-04T10:40">b</del></span>less
you guys^^</span></font></p></td>
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lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'><strong>Comment: </strong>Great
work! Seems like your writing is getting better each day.
Keep up the great effort!</span></font></p>
<p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><font size="3" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"><span
lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'><strong>Personal comment:</strong>
Tell me more about this fireworks event. Where will it be held
and when? Anyway, you have a great weekend too. :-)</span></font></p></td>
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첫댓글cheers!! dude..the event is held every Saturday til...I don't know. But definately next week.. near Han-River 63-building. But the entrance fee may be required if you want to see more spectacular views. Every thing is up to YOU..^^enjoy yours^^ and please reply my question^^
Your question is for me to join the event? ... or do you mean that I should go and see the fireworks? I will try but to be honest, with my baby recently born (4weeks now), I am not sure if I can get away to Han River. However, I will see what happens...:-)
I guess you couldn't find a my question^^ Here is my question^^ I have a question about a spelling between USA and BRITISH. I used to study overseas with a style of british. Whenever I leave a daily, I find something 'se,,ze''such as recogni(se), Is the 'se' wrong?
Ah...hhh. Well, I am used to writing in the Canadian way...and sometimes even Canadians spell differently than Americans. For example...we spell "colour", whereas the Americans spell the word "color". I wouldn't say how you spell is wrong.. I am just used to spelling it my way...that's all. :-)
첫댓글 cheers!! dude..the event is held every Saturday til...I don't know. But definately next week.. near Han-River 63-building. But the entrance fee may be required if you want to see more spectacular views. Every thing is up to YOU..^^enjoy yours^^ and please reply my question^^
Your question is for me to join the event? ... or do you mean that I should go and see the fireworks? I will try but to be honest, with my baby recently born (4weeks now), I am not sure if I can get away to Han River. However, I will see what happens...:-)
I guess you couldn't find a my question^^ Here is my question^^ I have a question about a spelling between USA and BRITISH. I used to study overseas with a style of british. Whenever I leave a daily, I find something 'se,,ze''such as recogni(se), Is the 'se' wrong?
One thing more, CONGRATULATION on your new angel^^WOW, I can't even imagine how weird that feel to have a child^^
Ah...hhh. Well, I am used to writing in the Canadian way...and sometimes even Canadians spell differently than Americans. For example...we spell "colour", whereas the Americans spell the word "color". I wouldn't say how you spell is wrong.. I am just used to spelling it my way...that's all. :-)
And, thank you. My baby boy is an Angel brought to me by God! It really does changes ones life. :-)