Re: 1C 217-Sofia

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Title: "MillyMolly and Jimmy's seeds Seeds"

One day Jimmy's desk was empty**.** But Jimmy loved growing plants more than anything else. best of all Jimmy loved growing plants Jimmy's desk was empty the next day and the next... Miss Blythe stretched her arms around everyone and they all cried together**.** They decided to put a bunch of flowers on Jimmy's desk**,** and for a while**,** that helped**.** they waters They watered and waited**.** the The sunflower stood tall, and Jimmy was back again.

Score: B-

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