Essay-bob

[규태]

Topic: If you could be a superhero, in an animation, who would you want to be and why?

The super hero is who are have a lot of ability to protect person and speical power. like superman, spiderman, bat man , iron man act. like these there are alot of superhero in our books but I want to be a superman. I wil tell you why i dont to be superman

First, superman have most abilities than other heros the superman can flying and, lazer beam and they can find the things

Second, the other heros are poor and had bad life for example, spider man is very poor so he cant pay the house. and bat man lost his  so he always ran away if he see the owner   but super man is one of the good life person.

Like that I want to be a superman.

[ben teacher]

There are many superheroes that have the ability to protect people and have special powers like Superman, Spiderman, Batman , Iron Man, etc. Like these superheroes, there are a lot of superheroes in our books, but I want to be like Superman. I will tell you why I want to be like Superman.
First, Superman has more abilities than other heroes. Superman can fly, laser beam, and can find things.

[ben teacher]

Second, the other heroes are poor and had a bad life. For example, Spiderman is very poor so he can’t pay for a house. Batman has no money, so he always runs away if he sees the owner, but Superman is a good person. I want to be like Superman.

[ben teacher]

Bob- Be careful with your spelling and capital letters. Are you sure Superman can shoot laser beams and Batman is poor? Check again!