Re: 1C 218-Mark

[Sub Tutor]

Here's the corrected version with simple markups for 2nd graders:

Title: "Milly and Molly's Mix"

One day, Farmer Hegarty fet fed breakfast to his animals. Salt and Pepper ate oadt oats and barley. Beaky and friends ate mize corn abd and Mr. Rooster ate specially mixed grain. Bunty's hay was clover and Pennyrial's Pennyroyal's was pea peas. Barker and Bouncer ate crunchy bones. Rosie and Rascal ate pumpkins. Bunt-Me-Not ate anything and everything. Next day, Farmer Hegarty went to buying to buy animals feed animal feed. It seemed an a great idea at that time. But everything was tipped and tossed and trampled. So Milly and Molly swept the leftover mix into a huge envelop pile and bagged it. Farmer Hegarty didn't know this thing. But his animals look looked so calm. He call called the vet. The vet was said to said the animals get got a balanced diet. So Farmer Hegarty sell sold the mix.

Score: B+

팁)

1. '먹이를 주다'는 'fed'로 써요.
2. '옥수수'는 'corn'이에요.
3. '편지봉투'는 'envelope'예요. 하지만 여기서는 '더미(pile)'가 맞아요.
4. 동물들이 왜 차분해졌는지 설명하면 좋겠어요.
5. 농부가 왜 동물 사료를 팔기로 했는지 써보세요.