<p class="cafe-editor-text">1. Premium bus<br />From Seoul to Busan, it take almost 5 hours by bus. The premium bus which is extraordinarily expensive, as much as KTX, does not have advantage on shortening the time but provides cozy place. I love taking that bus way more than taking KTX. The seat enables me to sleep by lengthening itself to let me lie down. It also has a table that I can use to eat something or read book. What would amaze you is the presence of personal light attached on chair to shine the table. It allows me to read or watch movie without tiring my eyes. Of course, it has small TV on each seat. Also, bottles of water is provided. Among them what I love most is the light and lieable chair: I read book in lied posture with turning the light own. The curtain settled between seats form the private space. I could spend 5 hours on bus without exhaustion. I am more energized even.<br /><br />2. Movie Elysium<br />On bus, I watched the movie titled Elysium. I have never heard about that movie. It was one-glance sify movie that I have few interest in. However, I try to watch a lot of them to broaden the cultural background of Hollywood and American culture. I loathed sify because it is fiction. However, it occurred to me that it is not a fictional stories anymore. Elysium was a movie describing the injustice of life driven by wealth. The rich moved to Elysium which is heaven-like planet, leaving behind polluted Earth and 1 bottom percent of poor people. It got me to think the danger of traveling Mars that would soon arrive. If it pages through living in Mars, who would leave on Earth?<br /><br />3. My impulsiveness<br />I am an unwise and impulsive human being. Right before coming back from Seoul, I felt some void to leave it. Then I decided to go to watch the musical. On my way to Bus station, I got out of that track and went to art center. While making my way to that musical center, I tried to reserve the seat through online. I took Naverpay and got angry due to its ill-sending of texting numbers for security. It turned out to be the mobile agency's original diturrence with spam. Anyway I should have stopped there when I was unable to book. I am not a person who can stop when something was going on in my head. Finally I reserved through long minutes waiting of calling and asking to the service center. When I arrived the center, I could not find way to use the elevater. It was totally different from that of others: press the button on screen and wait. No signs of coming down or up. I was supposed to arrive 7th floor and it was 9 when I learned to use it. Then I ran through exit route to enter the hall as fast as I can. From here was a problem: I was stuck in the serene and stuffy stairs. It was not openable from the outside. I called but no one in charge got the call. I felt dizzy but went up again to that 9th floor all the way from 7th and 8th. Then there was interphone to call somebody. When I was out, I waited the elevator again. And terrible fact loomed. The musical was not today's but tomorrow's. I could not process for several minutes and when I realized it and tried to cancel the ticket, it requested me to pay VAT for canceling it. It costed 10800won... My bloody money flied away. I called to the Naverpay sevice center again and again, but it was nothing more than useless back-and-forth. I learned today not to be so impulsive and check again when I book something. More important, not to buy things online.</p>
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첫댓글1. Lemonade stand Finally, we sold our lemonade! However, the weather was pretty bad. It was rainy. So we sold small amount of lemonade, but thanks to moojukers, we didn't lose money. 2. VR During break time in Moojuk we talked about VR. When I came back home I searched for it. It was around 10000~ 30000 won. When I said to my mother to buy it on my birthday, she said she will concider it because it's not good for eyes. 3. Chinese reataurant Next to moojuk school there is chinese restaurant. When I arrived home I telled to my mother to go there this week she said let's go on Friday.
You are talking about the Chinese restaurant on first floor right? Please tell me how the food was later. Burning curiosity pokes me. You have good sense in grammar! One mistake I delicatedly found in your 3rd writing is 'telled'. You should say told and 'to' does not go with tell.→→→I told my mom.
1. video clip Today my class take a video clip. I tried to memorize well but be beyond one´s control. So I read . Tomorrow I take it, I want to do well.
2. doll Today my first sister get a cute doll in claw machine. My sister give it to me. Next time, I want to get doll myself because it looks fun. But money can waste.
3. fruits Today my mother bought grapes, and peaches. It was sweat. I am glad to eat it.
Charlie, I really appreciate your diary everyday. If you keep at writing this everyday, you will face one day the dramatic improvement in your English. My role is to cut the time and help you be better faster. I will give you one suggestion a day to change your writing habit. For today, try to use the word 'will' if you want to say future actions. And try to put 'd' or 'ed' after verb. To adopt this into your today's writing, ' Today my class took video clip' and 'Tomorrow I will take it.'
첫댓글 1. Lemonade stand
Finally, we sold our lemonade! However, the weather was pretty bad. It was rainy. So we sold small amount of lemonade, but thanks to moojukers, we didn't lose money.
2. VR
During break time in Moojuk we talked about VR. When I came back home I searched for it. It was around 10000~ 30000 won. When I said to my mother to buy it on my birthday, she said she will concider it because it's not good for eyes.
3. Chinese reataurant
Next to moojuk school there is chinese restaurant. When I arrived home I telled to my mother to go there this week she said let's go on Friday.
If you want to try VR kit, I can give you. You can make the glass by yourself with the kit and put your cellphone with VR app in it.
You are talking about the Chinese restaurant on first floor right? Please tell me how the food was later. Burning curiosity pokes me.
You have good sense in grammar! One mistake I delicatedly found in your 3rd writing is 'telled'. You should say told and 'to' does not go with tell.→→→I told my mom.
1. video clip
Today my class take a video clip. I tried to memorize well but be beyond one´s control. So I read . Tomorrow I take it, I want to do well.
2. doll
Today my first sister get a cute doll in claw machine. My sister give it to me. Next time, I want to get doll myself because it looks fun. But money can waste.
3. fruits
Today my mother bought grapes, and peaches. It was sweat. I am glad to eat it.
Ye.. buying a doll from machine is a gamble! You may lose a bunch of money. I can say by my experience.TT
Charlie, I really appreciate your diary everyday. If you keep at writing this everyday, you will face one day the dramatic improvement in your English. My role is to cut the time and help you be better faster. I will give you one suggestion a day to change your writing habit. For today, try to use the word 'will' if you want to say future actions. And try to put 'd' or 'ed' after verb. To adopt this into your today's writing, ' Today my class took video clip' and 'Tomorrow I will take it.'
Charlie~ I believe in you. Go for it!