<p>The title of this book is Wind and Little <s>Rabit</s> Rabbit. One night, Wind <s>looks</s> looked mad. Trees were shaking, and leaves were blowing all around. Wind <s>asked</s> asked for Little <s>Rabit</s> Rabbit. Little <s>Rabit</s> Rabbit was scared. Little <s>Rabit</s> Rabbit was even more scared. So, she started to run toward the third hill. And <s>gently</s> finally, she arrived on the moon. Meanwhile, Wind <s>is</s> was still wandering around the earth, looking for Little <s>Rabit</s> Rabbit. I think this book is nice.</p><p><br>Score: B+</p><p>Tips)</p><ol style="list-style-type: decimal;" data-ke-list-type="decimal"><li>'토끼'의 영어 철자는 'Rabbit'이에요. 'a'를 넣는 것을 잊지 마세요.</li><li>이야기를 쓸 때는 과거형을 사용해요. 예를 들어 'looks'는 'looked'로 바꿔요.</li><li>'Wind asked of Little Rabbit'은 조금 이상해요. 'Wind looked for Little Rabbit'이 더 자연스러워요.</li><li>'부드럽게'라는 뜻의 'gently' 대신 '마침내'라는 뜻의 'finally'를 쓰면 더 좋아요.</li><li>왜 이 책이 좋다고 생각하는지 더 자세히 써보면 좋아요.</li></ol>
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