[Corrected] jet lag...

[Jim Lee]

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There is a seventeen-hour time difference between Seoul and Vancouver. Because Seoul is ahead of 17 hours, one day is gained when going to Vancouver and one day is lost reversely. When one arrives at the destination of trip at first, they usually don't feel jet lag due to expectation. But when one come back from trip, they feel very tired and struggle with jet lag. The same as me, I couldn't sleep well last a few days. I got up several times in the middle of sleeping. In the morning after that, I felt walking in the air and dizzy. I all of sudden doze over my work from time to time. I think I'll recover from jet lag soon.	There is a seventeen-hour time difference between Seoul and Vancouver. Because Seoul is ahead byof 17 hours, one day is gained when we going to Vancouver and one day is lost when we come back reversely. When one arrives at the destination of one’s trip at first, one they usually doesn't feel jet lagged due to high expectation. But when one comes back from the trip, one they feels very tired and struggle with jet lag. The same is happening to as me., I couldn't sleep well in the last a few days. I got up several times in the middle of sleeping. In the morning after that, I felt like I walking in a daze the air and dizzy. I all of a sudden doze off over while working my work from time to time. I think I'll recover from the jet lag soon.
Comment: Great work!  You are a good writer.  Keep it up. Walking in air = 기분좋을데 쓰는말이에요…사랑에 빠졌을데…그럴데. Personal Comment: I do hope that you will get over the jet lag soon.

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