<p>The title of this story is "Why We Come in Different Colors."</p><p>This story <b><s>is explain</s></b> <b>explains</b> about skin.</p><p><b><s>The Sunlight is</s></b> <b>Sunlight is</b> a very important <b><s>thing to</s></b> <b>part of</b> our body.</p><p>But it <b><s>contain</s></b> <b>contains</b> harmful UV light.</p><p>UV light <b><s>is help to made</s></b> <b>helps make</b> vitamin D.</p><p>Vitamin D <b><s>is build</s></b> <b>builds</b> strong bones and <b><s>absorb</s></b> <b>absorbs</b> important minerals.</p><p>I think this story is helpful, because <b><s>this story give me a many things</s></b> <b>it gave me a lot of new information.</b></p><p><b>Score: B</b></p><p><b>Tips:</b></p><ol style="list-style-type: decimal;" data-ke-list-type="decimal"><li><b>'is explain'은 'explains'처럼 동사 형태를 바꿔 써야 해요.</b> 설명할 때는 현재형을 사용해요.</li><li><b>더 자연스러운 표현을 생각해 봐요.</b> 예: 'give me a many things' 대신 'gave me a lot of new information'이 더 자연스러워요.</li><li><b>"Sunlight is very important" 문장에서 'the'를 사용하지 않아도 돼요.</b></li></ol>
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