Re: Lily 1c 053 (1/2)

[Sub tutor 1]

Wind The wind blew so hard that is it lifted Sarah up in the air.

Finally, Sarah landed on a misty island in the cloud clouds.
The island was filled with kites and balloons.

And An old man lived on the island.
The old man grabbed Sarah and locked her in a cage.

Sarah was scared frightened, but later she met an albatross.
And The albatross help helped Sarah.
The albatross opend opened the cage,

and Sarah tied many balloons to herself and started to float away.

The old man tried to grabbed to grab Sarah, but the albatross chased him away.
As Sarah floated back home, the albatross started to burst the balloons,
and Sarah come came back home.

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⭐ Score: B+

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Tips)

• 문장 맨 앞에는 The wind / An old man처럼 관사를 써요.

• 과거 이야기라서 동사는 helped / opened / came처럼 과거형을 써요.

• cloud → clouds처럼 여러 개면 -s를 붙여요.

• 문장 처음에 And는 되도록 쓰지 말고 The / An으로 시작해요.