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<td width=291 valign=top bgcolor="#E6E6E6" class="Normal"> <p align=center style='text-align:center'><b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Your writing</span></b></p></td>
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style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'>My corrections</span></b></p></td>
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<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>Q17</span></p>
<p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>One of the man is touching
his chin.<br>
The desk is not cleared off.<br>
The man are sitting oppsite at each other.<br>
A blind has been drawn.</span></p>
<p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>Q18</span></p>
<p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>The boxes are filled with
the goods.< packed with, full of, crammde with><br>
The goods are cleaned up in boxes.<br>
The boxes are set next to one another.</span></p></td>
<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>Q17</span></p>
<p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>One of the </span><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333;'><span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2005-07-23T22:17">men </ins></span></span><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'><span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2005-07-23T22:17">man</del></span> is touching
his chin.<br>
The desk </span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333;'><span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2005-07-23T22:19">has not been </ins></span></span><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'><span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2005-07-23T22:19">is not</del></span> cleared
off.<br>
The </span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333;'><span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2005-07-23T22:18">men </ins></span></span><span style='font-size:
10.0pt;color:#333333'><span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2005-07-23T22:18">man</del></span> are sitting opp</span><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333;'><span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2005-07-23T22:18">o</ins></span></span><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>site <span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2005-07-23T22:18">at</del></span> each other.<br>
A blind has been drawn.</span></p>
<p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>Q18</span></p>
<p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>The boxes are filled with
<span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2005-07-23T22:18">the</del></span>
goods.< packed with, full of, cramm</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
color:#333333;'><span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2005-07-23T22:18">e</ins></span></span><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>d<span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2005-07-23T22:18">e</del></span> with><br>
The goods </span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333;'><span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2005-07-23T22:18">have been arranged </ins></span></span><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'><span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2005-07-23T22:18">are cleaned up</del></span>
in boxes.<br>
The boxes are set next to one another.</span></p></td>
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<td width=581 colspan=2 valign=top class="Normal"> <p><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Arial'>Comment:</span></b></p>
<p><span style='font-size:10.0pt; font-family:Arial'>Great writing. Keep
up the great work!</span></p></td>
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