DIARY OF A WIMPY KID 1
ORIGINAL ENTRY: 41-50
Monday : Manny got ahold of one of Godrich's heavy metal
Manny got a hold of one of Rodrick’s heavy metal
magazines, and one of the page's had a picture of a woman in a
magazine, and one of the pages had a picture of a woman in a
bikini lying across the hood of a car. And then Manny brought it
bikini lying across the hood of a car. And then Manny brought it
into day care for show -and-tell.
into day care for show and tell.
Mom was very angry so she gave Rodrick's punishment. His
Mom was very angry so she gave Rodrick’s punishment. His
punishment was that he had to answer a bunch of questions
punishment was that he had to answer a bunch of questions
mom wrote out for him.
mom wrote out for him.
Wednesday : Greg still playing video games with Manny. He
Greg still playing video games with Manny. He
found how to get some of his games past Rowely's dad. He put
found how to get some of his games past Rowley’s dad. He put
his discs in Manny's " Discovering the Alphabet" case, and then
his discs in Manny’s “ Discovering the Alphabet “ case, and then
that's all it takes to his house.
that’s all it takes to his house.
Thursday : Greg school's student government elections are
Greg school’s student government elections are
coming up. So he prepare for voting.
coming up. So he prepare for voting.
Friday : He went and put his name on the list to run for
He went and put his name on the list to run for
treasurer. Unluckly. this kid named Marty Porter is running for
treasurer. Unluckily this kid named Marty Porter is running for
treasurer, too, and he real brainy at math. He told it to father
treasurer too and he’s real brainy at math. He told it to his father
and he seemed very excited. Dad ran for student government
and he seemed very excited. Dad ran for student government
when he was his age, and he actually won.And then he made
when he was his age, and he actually won. And then he made
poster up to night.
posters until night time.
Monday : He brought his posters in to his school, and he started
He brought his posters to school, and he started
hanging his posters up as soon as he got in. Three minutes
hanging his posters up as soon as he got in. Three minutes
before Vice Principal Roy spotted them. He said yo weren't
before Vice Principal Roy spotted them. He said you weren’t
allowed to write fabrications about the other candicates.
allowed to write fabrications about the other candidates.
Monday : Halloween is coming over. It is Dad's favorite holiday,
Halloween is coming over. It is Dad’s favorite holiday,
too, but for a different reason. Holloween night, while all the
too, but for a different reason, Halloween night, while all the
other parents are handing out candy, he is hiding in the bushes
other parents are handing out candy, he is hiding in the bushes
with a big trash can full of water.
with a big trash can full of water.
And if teenager pass by his driveway, then he drencher them.
And if teenagers pass by their driveway, then he drenches them
FINAL ENTRY WITH CORRECTIONS;
Manny got a hold of one of Rodrick’s heavy metal magazine, and one of the pages had a picture of a woman in a bikini lying across the hood of a car. And then Manny brought it into day care for show and tell. Mom was very angry so she gave Rodrick’s punishment. His punishment was that he had to answer a bunch of questions mom wrote out for him. Greg still playing video games with Manny. He found how to get some of his games past Rowley’s dad. He put his discs in Manny’s “Discovering the Alphabet “case, and then that’s all it takes to his house. Greg school’s student government elections are coming up. So he prepare for voting. He went and put his name on the list to run for treasurer. Unluckily this kid named Marty Porter is running for treasurer too and he’s real brainy at math. He told it to his father and he seemed very excited. Dad ran for student government when he was his age, and he actually won. And then he made posters until night time. He brought his posters to school, and he started hanging his posters up as soon as he got in. Three minutes before Vice Principal Roy spotted them. He said you weren’t allowed to write fabrications about the other candidates.Halloween are coming over. It is Dad’s favorite holiday, too, but for a different reason, Halloween night, while all the other parents are handing out candy, he is hiding in the bushes with a big trash can full of water. And if teenagers pass by their driveway, then he drenches them.
Comment:
Thanks for sending your summary Lily! You can summarize each situation properly. Just take note of the indention and the spelling of the names of the characters. Try to check the spacing of each word. There are some lines and sentences that are not properly constructed but just keep on sending your diary and later on you can follow the right sentence pattern.
Teacher Therese!