Re: 1C-61 Isabella

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The book's title is "Alexander Graham Bell, the Great Inventor." Alexander Graham Bell was born in Scotland in 1847. When he was 12 years old, he invented a machine that cleaned wheat. This helped farmers do their work quickly. Alexander's mother was deaf, which inspired him to study speech and sound**,** like his father. When Alexander was 23, he moved to Canada with his family. Alexander started teaching a deaf woman named Mabel. Five years later**,** they got married. On March 10, 1876, Alexander sent the first message ever by telephone. Alexander died in 1922. After I read this book, I think Alexander was a very great Inventor inventor.

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