Re: Read It Unit 11 - Felix

[Teacher Winget]

The title of the book is "Why We Come in Different Colors."

I think this book is great because I can know learned about "melanin" after reading it. If I have a lot of melanin, my skin color is become becomes darker, and if I have less melanin, my skin color is become becomes lighter. Before reading this book, I think that how our wondered why our skin colors are different. I can slove solved this question today.

Score: B+

Tips:

1. 'is become' 대신 'becomes'를 사용해요. 시제가 더 자연스럽게 맞춰져요.
2. 'I can know'는 'I learned'로 바꿔 써요. 배운 내용을 이야기할 때는 'learned'가 더 적합해요.
3. 'Solve'의 철자가 틀렸어요. 'Solve'로 고쳐요.