[Corrected] mu business trip

[Jim Lee]

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I am afraid of my business trip in May these days. I'm going to go on a business trip to Tapan in May with my two supervisors. When I heard of that last week,I was excited because it will be my first abroad trip as a business trip. But I soon realized that I can't speak English fluently. President said " This meeting will be going on through English and this member is consisited of U.S.A president, U.K. president, Austrailia's president , Japanese President and each contry's technicians and engineers". AT that moment, I was out of breath.What's going on? My head was being vacant. But,I know, It's already out of my hand. I remember that practice is the way to improving.	I am afraid of my business trip in May these days. I'm going to go on a business trip to Taipan in May with my two supervisors. When I heard of the news that last week, I was excited because it will be my first business trip abroad trip as a business trip. But I soon realized that I can't speak English fluently. The Ppresident said " This meeting will be conducted in going on through English and theis members is will include consisited of a U.S.A president, U.K. president, Austrailia's president , Japanese President and each country's technicians and engineers". AT that moment, I was out of breath. What's going on? My head was all of a sudden empty being vacant. But, I know, IIt's already out of my hand. I remember that practice is the way to improving.
Comment: Great writing! Personal Comment: You should practice everyday to gain more confidence in yourself.  Remember, communication is not only language…there is also body language.