Re: 2a 201 let's go out and play.steven

[Teacher1]

The title of this book is lets "Let's go out and play Go Out and Play". one One day Danny want wanted to go out and play. mom Mom said you "You must wear a winter clothes." but But denny Danny doesn't didn't want to wear a winter clothes. he He said "why shen doesn't "Why doesn't she wear clothes?" mom Mom said because he have "Because she has many a lot of fur." denny Danny doesn't didn't go out then . He read picture a picture book. denny Danny saw ant ants, bird birds and bear bears. they They sleep in winter. denny Danny doesn't didn't understand. mom Mom said to denny Danny for that bears winter sleep. then Then denny Danny go went out and play played. i I think this book is helpful and i I want to go out and play with in the snow.

Score: B-

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