<p><s>to day stories</s> <b>Today's story is</b> Caillou's Quarrel.<br>One day, <s>Caillou house come in to Clementine</s> <b>Clementine came to Caillou's house</b>.<br>Caillou <s>want to dinosaur</s> <b>wanted to play with dinosaurs</b> with Clementine.<br>But Clementine <s>want to family play</s> <b>wanted to play family</b> (house play).<br>Caillou <s>upset</s> <b>was upset</b> and <s>get out</s> <b>got out</b> of his room.<br>Caillou <s>runs</s> <b>ran</b> to Mom.<br><s>and going to caillou's room with mom</s> → <b>He went back to Caillou's room with Mom</b>.<br><s>and caillou clementine settle</s> → <b>Caillou and Clementine made up.</b></p><p><b>Score: C+</b></p><hr data-ke-style="style1"><p><b>Tips)</b></p><ul style="list-style-type: disc;" data-ke-list-type="disc"><li>"to day stories"는 "Today's story is"로 바꿔야 해요.</li><li>"Caillou house come in to Clementine"은 자연스럽지 않아요. → "Clementine came to Caillou's house"가 맞아요.</li><li>"want to dinosaur" → "wanted to play with dinosaurs"처럼 동사를 정확히 써야 해요.</li><li>"family play"보다는 "play house" 또는 "play family"처럼 바꿔 써야 해요.</li><li>과거 이야기니까 "runs", "get out"은 "ran", "got out"으로 바꿔야 해요.</li></ul><p>이야기 순서는 잘 구성했어요! 다음에는 Caillou가 어떻게 화해했는지, 기분은 어땠는지 조금 더 써보면 더 좋아요 😊<br>예: They smiled and played together happily.</p>
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