<p><b>Max's Castle</b></p><p>I will summarize the <b>Max and Ruby</b> story.</p><p>Ruby and Louise decided to build the perfect castle, just like their pictures.</p><p>When they were building the castle, Max brought more blocks, and the castle <b>broke</b> <s>is broken</s>.</p><p>Ruby told Max that <b>more doesn’t always mean better</b> <s>more didn't mean better</s>.</p><p>But with Max’s help, Louise made the turret, stairway, and archway <b>as</b> parts of the castle.</p><p>They decorated the castle with <b>a</b> princess and <b>a</b> star.</p><p>Finally, they needed a handsome prince.</p><p>At that time, Max built the perfect castle with his rabbit toy.</p><p>In my opinion, I think this episode was <b>more boring</b> <s>boring than</s> than other stories.</p><p><b>Score: A-</b></p><p><b>Tips)</b></p><ul style="list-style-type: disc;" data-ke-list-type="disc"><li><b>"is broken" → "broke"</b> → 과거형 사용!</li><li><b>"more didn't mean better" → "more doesn’t always mean better"</b> → 더 자연스러운 표현!</li><li><b>"boring than" → "more boring than"</b> → 비교급에는 "more" 붙이기!</li><li><b>Max의 행동이 어떻게 중요한 역할을 했는지 조금 더 설명하면 좋을 것 같아요!</b></li></ul>
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