Re: 1C 62 Sofia

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The title of this book is "Helen Keller's tough Tough childhood Childhood." One day**,** a born young girl named Helen she got a fever. she She recovered but she became deaf and blind. she is She did not give up. Annie Sullivan helped her. Helen learn learned language to through water. She learned Latin and many languages. She felt vibrations and sing sang a songs. she is She was a very famous deaf girl.

Score: B-

Tips)

1. 제목의 중요한 단어는 대문자로 시작해요! ('Tough Childhood'처럼 써요)
2. 문장을 마침표로 잘 나눠주세요! (한 문장이 너무 길어지지 않게 해요)
3. 시제를 맞춰주세요! ('became', 'was'처럼 과거형으로 써요)
4. 헬렌은 어떻게 '물'이라는 단어를 통해 언어를 배웠나요? (자세히 설명해보세요)
5. 헬렌 켈러가 성인이 되어 이룬 업적도 써보면 좋겠어요! (그녀의 삶에 대해 더 써보세요)