Re: 서강현 summary

[Teacher1]

The title of this story is "Caillou's Quarrel."
Caillou's friend Clementine came to caillou 's Caillou's house to play.
They are playing played together, but they wanted to play differently.
They are fighting fought.
But they apologized to each other and made up.
Then Clementine's brother came, and they had fun.

Score: B+

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Tips)

• 이름(Caillou)은 항상 대문자로 시작해야 해요.
• "are playing"과 "are fighting"은 이야기에서 과거를 말하니까 "played", "fought"로 고쳐야 해요.
• 이야기에서 어떤 장난감을 가지고 놀고 싶었는지 한 문장만 더 넣으면 이야기가 훨씬 풍성해져요!
  예: Caillou wanted to play with dinosaurs, but Clementine wanted to play house. 😊
  
  너무 짧아! 다음에도 이렇게 쓰면 다시 써야해! (T monica)