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<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:black'>I became an uncle a few days ago for the first time. I was so pleased to hear that. I saw my nephew's picture on the homepage of my cousin. She is so cute and looks like an angel from heaven. Actually, I don't have many relatives. I have just 6 cousins, it's very a few number as comparaed with my friend's. We have got along well with each other. Anyway, I say again I'm happy to become an uncle. Most of all, I hope she will grow healthily well and without any concern. Then, she will be a person who she want to be.</span></p></td>
<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:black'>I became an uncle a few days ago for the first time. I was so pleased to hear that. I saw my nephew's picture on the homepage of my cousin. She is so cute and looks like an angel from heaven. Actually, I don't have many relatives. I have just 6 cousins<span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-09T14:36">.</ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-09T14:36">,</del></span> <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-09T14:36">i</del></span><span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-09T14:36">I</ins></span>t's <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-09T14:36">very</del></span> a <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-09T14:36">very </ins></span>few number <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-09T14:36">as</del></span> compar<span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-09T14:36">a</del></span>ed with my friend's<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-09T14:36"> relatives</ins></span>. We have got<span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-09T14:36">ten</ins></span> along well with each other. Anyway, I say again I'm happy to become an uncle. Most of all, I hope she will <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-09T14:37">be healthy </ins></span><span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-09T14:37">grow healthily well and </del></span>without any concern. Then, she <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-09T14:37">can </ins></span><span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-09T14:37">will</del></span> be a person <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-09T14:37">who</del></span> she want<span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-09T14:37">s</ins></span> to be.</span></p></td>
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style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Comment:</span></b><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'> Excellent work! You seem to impress me with your writing. Keep it up.</span></p>
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style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Personal Comment:</span></b><span style='font-size:11.0pt; font-family:Arial'> Congratulations on becoming an uncle. I think a new born baby is the best gift from God. :-)</span></p></td>
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