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I have a girlfrend. we promised to meet at the weekend and go to the amusement park for a date I wore the my best dress between mine. and I perchased a rose to give her. and then I went to the subway station in order to take the subway while I waited the train , I received her call she said " I don't keep the appointment with you because I have to attend import!ant conference." and then she ringed off . I disapointed her phone. and I cast a rose away into the trashbean. and I sited the bench and controled my mind. |
I have a girlfriend.
I wore and
while I waited for the train to arrive, I received a
and then she hung up I was disappointed with her
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