Re: Caillou-Caillou walks a dog:Jackson

[Teacher Winget]

This title is Caillou Walks a Dog.

"It's the puppy!"

Caillou had met this cute little dog before.
"Hello Caillou. I'm looking after this little fellow again."

Caillou wanted to walk around with the dog, so he please to his daddy asked his daddy.
Daddy allow walk around with dog allowed him to walk the dog.

Caillou throw threw the ball because Caillou have had a question about the dog bring ball whether the dog would bring it back.

Caillou wanted to dog a dog, but Daddy was against it.

So Caillou bring brought a toy dog.

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Score: B+

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Tips)

• “please to his daddy”는 말이 안 돼요. “asked his daddy”라고 해요.

• “throw”는 과거형이면 “threw”로 바꿔야 해요.

• “wanted to dog”는 틀렸어요. “wanted a dog”가 맞아요.

• “bring”은 과거면 “brought”로 써야 해요.

• Caillou가 강아지를 키우고 싶을 때 어떤 기분이었는지 한 문장 써보세요.

• 장난감 강아지를 어떻게 가지고 놀았는지도 추가하면 더 좋아요.