The title of this story is 'How to Deal with Cyberbullying'.
Cyberbullying is any form of harassment that takes place on various digitlal digital platforms.
But how to deal with cyberbullying?
First, collect evidence of the bullying.
Then show to show it to your parents, close relatives, or teachers.
They will help you!
I think cyberbullying is very bad . Because because bullying some one someone is a very bad thing.
We must do stop stop cyberbullying!!!
Score: A-
Tips:
'Digital'의 철자를 정확하게 써주세요.
'Show to your parents' 대신 'show it to your parents'로 쓰면 더 자연스러워요.
'Because'로 시작하는 문장은 앞 문장과 연결해서 한 문장으로 만들어보세요.
'Some one'은 'someone'으로 붙여서 써요.
'We must do stop cyberbullying' 대신 'We must stop cyberbullying'으로 쓰면 맞아요.