초급영작문: 작문 평가 준거 기준표

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사람들은 말합니다. 작문을 잘할려면 문법을 잘해야한다고.
그런 생각은 작문을 두번 죽이는 편견으로 과감하게 버려야
합니다. 여러분이 영어로 작문을 할 경우 문법은 전체 평가
기준의 1/3 밖에 되지 않습니다. 여러분이 가볍게 여기고
있으나 늘 중요한 평가 기준이 되고 있는 두가지 영역이
더 있습니다. 그것은 내용과 구조입니다. 너무 막연하게
들리지요? 아래에 구체적으로 그 내용을 설명해 놓았으니
수업시간 과제를 제출하거나 앞으로 영작 시험을 준비할때
늘 참고하기 바랍니다. 아래의 내용을 우리는 수업 시간에
단계별로 공부할 예정입니다.

Eval‎uating criteria of the written work

The three domains of analysis

1. Grammar -2
2. Content -2
3. Organization -2

Specification

1. Grammar: 21 items are the major concern of the eval‎uation. These are,

1) Noun(pluralization): I have several reason that a city life is better than a country life.

2) Pronoun (reference): Then, grandmother and mother made ancestor-memorial rites food and I helped it in the side.

3) Agreement (Subject and Verb): My English is terribly poor. So, it take me some time to write a letter in English.

4) Article: I plan to read the many books.

5) Preposition: A big city is always full by people.

6) Tenses(12 tenses): Umm.. Have you go to Baksuk Scholarship Information Stadium?

7) Determiners: Seoul is a capital in Korea.

8) Modals(to Root, Rooting, Rooted)
: I become respect her.

9) Root
I can't meditation, because there is a lot of noise.

10) Possessives:
...and small town is the object of the there adoration.

11) Object of a verb:
I can use easy.(what?)

12) Comparison
And the trees in Seoul seem to be more withered up than Kang Won Do.

13) Capital letters, punctuation
i often take a walk with my pet.

14) Spelling errors:
I believe in him and that is my fault.

15) Relative Pronoun:
I stayed Mokp'o which is my grandmother lived.

16) Tag Questions:
Last week, the basket ball game was very interesting, weren't it?

17) Noun:
I received your letter with delightful.

18) Adverb:
I always had lived there, (position)

19) Voice:
When the movie was end, my heart was breaking.

20) Verb:
The more I approach at a big city, the more I can feel the terrible kinds of pollutions.

21) Adjective:
Many people argue that living in a small town is help.


2. Content

2.1. Not clear meaning: For example, Seoul has a korean-style house which can feel about ancient things.
2.2. Word choice: I gain much money in days to come.
2.3. Sentence Variety:
2.3.1. Simple (S+V, S+V+SC, S+V+O, S+V+O+OC, S+V+IO+DO)
: Also traffic is convenience.
2.3.2. Compound:
The air is dirty, some trees are dying (conjunction is omitted)
2.3.3. Complex: Because of I enjoyed shopping very much, I like big city and life in a big city.
2.4. Usage:
I feel like to eat something.
2.5. Redundancy:
I went to go to the theater with my sister.
2.6. Style:
My family member is 4; mom, dad, younger brother and me.
2.7. Logic:
The man who is well-educated earns a lot of money.

3. Organization

3.1. Parallel Structure:
I attend a lecture, every Monday, Tuesday, Friday. (Conjunction is omitted)
3.2. Connectors
THE FIRST, for my healthy automobile exhaust gas, overcrowding are bring about smoke pollution and a noise.
3.3. Conjunction:
There are lots of people, many vehicles in a big city.(Conjunction is omitted)
3.4. Clear demonstration of introduction, body, and conclusion
3.5. Clear demonstration of thesis statement
3.6. The balance among introduction, body, and conclusion (in terms of the length of the sentnences)
3.7. Level of coherence