Re: 1C 62 Rai

[Teacher1]

The book's title is 'Helen Kelen's Keller's tough childhood'*.
When Helen is was young, helen Helen met scaret fevel scarlet fever.
She became recover recovered, but she can't couldn’t see and hear because of illness.
She learn learned how to say with her hands.
She had little tantrums.
But when she meet the theacher met the teacher Anne Sullivan, she become became a smart woman.
She can speek speak many languages and she can ride a horse too.

After I reading reading this story, I think Helen Keller is so amazing people an amazing person because she can't couldn’t see or hear but she get degree got a degree.

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Score: B+

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Tips)

• Helen Keller: 이름은 항상 정확하게 써야 해요! (Kelen → Keller)
• was / met / became / got: 과거 이야기니까 과거형을 써야 해요.
• the theacher → the teacher: 같은 단어가 두 번 쓰이지 않도록 주의해요.
• people → person: Helen은 한 사람이니까 person이 맞아요.
• get a degree → got a degree: 과거에 졸업했으니 got을 써야 맞아요.

👉 헬렌 켈러가 어떻게 손으로 말하는 법을 배웠는지, 어떤 말을 처음 했는지 써보면 더 감동적인 이야기가 돼요!

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