<p>Peppa's family went to the picnic. Daddy Pig <s>was bring</s> <b>brought</b> <s>breads</s> <b>bread</b>, cheese, tomatoes and lemonade.</p><p>They <s>enjoed</s> <b>enjoyed</b> <b>the</b> picnic at the top of the mountain. They ate <s>sandwich</s> <b>sandwiches</b> and Daddy Pig took a nap.</p><p>When Daddy Pig took a nap, Peppa and George fed the ducks. But they wanted some more <s>foods</s> <b>food</b>. They followed <s>them</s> <b>the ducks</b>.</p><p>They ate <s>cakes</s> <b>cake</b>. Suddenly, <s>a bee</s> <b>a bee</b> followed Mommy Pig. And <s>a bee</s> <b>the bee</b> followed Daddy Pig.</p><p>It was time to <s>back home</s> <b>go back home</b>. Peppa and George <s>say</s> <b>said</b> <s>goodby</s> <b>goodbye</b> <s>for</s> <b>to the</b> ducks.</p><p>Score: A-</p><p>Tips)</p><ul style="list-style-type: disc;" data-ke-list-type="disc"><li><p>과거 이야기라서 <b>bring → brought, enjoy → enjoyed, say → said</b>를 써요.</p></li><li><p>셀 수 없는 것은 <b>bread, food, cake</b>처럼 s를 붙이지 않아요.</p></li><li><p><b>go back home</b>처럼 자연스럽게 표현해요.</p></li><li><p>마지막에 “They had a fun picnic.” 같은 문장을 더 쓰면 이야기가 더 좋아요.</p></li></ul>
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