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<P>A world-class scientist and a young boy are debating over the existence of heaven. This unlikely match began after the renowned physicist denied heaven, calling it a fairy story made by weak humans. Then the 12-year-old boy rebutted the argument, saying his own experience of going to heaven when nearing death proves that heaven is real. </P>
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<P>Although there is still some controversy over the issue in the United States, about 75% of Americans believe that heaven is real. It seems that the young boy is winning the debate and leading the religious belief at least in the U.S. </P>
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saying his own experience of going to heaven when nearing death proves that heaven is real. -> 천국 뒤에 when nearing death 이게 잘 안 와닿아요. 순서를 바꾸면 어떨까요? saying his visit to Heaven after his near-death experience proves ~ ???
난 두 번째 문단에서 제일 중요한 건 "그 꼬마애가 적어도 미국에선 승자가 될 것 같다" 부분인 것 같아. "leading the religious belief at least in the U.S." 부분은 굳이 없어도 될 것 같고... 아래 처럼 고치면 어떨지..
Although there is still some controversy over the issue in the United States, it seems that the young boy is winning the debate. because about 75% of Americans believe that heaven is real.
첫댓글 This unlikely match -> 뭐가 좀 빠진 것 같은데 >_< 아닌가~~잘 모르겠어용ㅋㅋ
This match seems a little unlikely, ~ 라고 하면 너무 길까요?
지인씨 표현 맞는 것 같삼. 구글링해보니 "an unlikely match" 요런식으로 쓰는 듯..
his own experience of going to heaven -> going이 조금 이상한 것 같아요^^;
의미로는 이미 다녀왔다는 gone 같은 게 들어가야할 것 같은데 그대로 넣으면 형태가 더 안 맞고ㅠㅠ;; 음흠
saying his own experience of going to heaven when nearing death proves that heaven is real.
-> 천국 뒤에 when nearing death 이게 잘 안 와닿아요. 순서를 바꾸면 어떨까요?
saying his visit to Heaven after his near-death experience proves ~ ???
나도 이 부분 이상하다고 생각했삼. "천국에 다녀온 경험"이 되어야 하는데 "천국에 가는 그의 경험"이라고 해석이 되어 버리니까...
차라리 "saying he experienced heaven when he was near death" 요런 식은 어때?
제 생각엔 his experience of heaven 이라고 해도 말 될것 같아요. 어떤 예문 보니깐 experience of the US 라는 게 있더라구요! ㅋ
뉴스에서처럼 이게 핵심이니까 at least in the U.S. 이 말이 맨 앞에 나오면 더 좋을 것 같아요.
난 두 번째 문단에서 제일 중요한 건 "그 꼬마애가 적어도 미국에선 승자가 될 것 같다" 부분인 것 같아. "leading the religious belief at least in the U.S." 부분은 굳이 없어도 될 것 같고... 아래 처럼 고치면 어떨지..
Although there is still some controversy over the issue in the United States, it seems that the young boy is winning the debate. because about 75% of Americans believe that heaven is real.
보니까 어색하다고 느끼는 부분이 비슷비슷한 것 같다..ㅎㅎ