The title is "Caillou Grows Carrots."
Grandpa making a vegetable patch Grandpa was making a vegetable patch.
Caillou's like to grow carrots Caillou liked growing carrots.
Caillou gave carrots seed a water Caillou watered the carrot seeds.
tomorrow weather is rainy The weather forecast for tomorrow said it would rain.
Squirrel steals carrots A squirrel stole some carrots.
Caillou's harvests carrots Caillou harvested the carrots.
Caillou's eat Caillou's grow carrot Caillou ate the carrots he grew.
Rosies like carrots Rosie liked the carrots too.
The story is fun.
Score: B+
Tips):
문법과 표현:
- "Grandpa making" → "Grandpa was making"
- "Caillou gave carrots seed a water" → "Caillou watered the carrot seeds"
- "Squirrel steals carrots" → "A squirrel stole some carrots"
내용 추가하기:
- Squirrel이 당근을 훔쳤을 때 Caillou가 어떻게 반응했는지 추가해 보세요.
- Caillou와 Rosie가 당근을 먹으며 나눈 대화를 상상해 보세요.
문장 연결:
- 문장을 부드럽게 연결하려면 "Then," "Finally," 같은 연결어를 활용하세요.