Re: Max and Ruby Austin

[Teacher Winget]

The title of this book is "Max and Ruby."

I'm going to introduce Max and Ruby today. Then I'll start Let me begin.

The title of this story is "Ruby Delivers."

In the wake of the Berniscout sale For the Bunny Scout Bake Sale, Ruby sold cupcakes.

They also made flyers.

However, Max kept interrupting her, but Max's plane helped Ruby make the poster and also helped stamp it by stamping the posters and helping make copies.

Also, a drone on Meg helped her Max's drone also helped her, and eventually, she was able to successfully sell cupcakes.

Now that episode 2 is over with this story Now that episode 1 is complete, I'm going to start episode 2.

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Score: B+

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Tips):

1. 문법과 표현:

   • "Berniscout sale" → "Bunny Scout Bake Sale"로 수정하세요.
   • "a drone on Meg" → "Max's drone"로 문맥에 맞게 고치세요.
   • "Then I'll start" → "Let me begin"로 더 자연스럽게 표현하세요.

2. 내용 추가하기:

   • Max가 비행기를 활용해 Ruby를 도운 장면을 더 구체적으로 적어 보세요.
   • Bunny Scout Bake Sale에서 사람들이 어떻게 반응했는지 추가하면 더 흥미로울 것입니다.

3. 문장 연결:

   • 문장을 더 부드럽게 연결하려면 "Meanwhile," "Finally," 같은 연결어를 활용하세요.