The title of this book is C̶hoosing a P̶et. O̶ne day, will̶i̶u̶m̶ William gave̶ was given money f̶o̶r̶ by his mother because it was his bri̶t̶h̶d̶a̶y̶ birthday. T̶hen he went to petshop. F̶irst, he saw a̶ monkey. H̶e like̶ liked monkey̶ monkeys but h̶e̶r̶ his mother do̶s̶e̶n̶'̶t̶ doesn't like them. S̶o, he do̶s̶e̶n̶'̶t̶ didn't buy̶ it. S̶econd, William saw gold̶ goldfish. M̶r. Gage said, "G̶old̶ goldfish can swim" but W̶illiam do̶s̶e̶n̶'̶t̶ didn't l̶l̶i̶k̶e̶ like them. T̶hird, William went to turtle̶ a turtle. T̶urtle̶ Turtles can crawl o̶n̶ William's hands and swim. S̶uddenly turtle put p̶n̶ its legs and it's̶ its head in̶. William do̶s̶e̶n̶'̶t̶ didn't like that t̶hen he go̶ so he went to next. T̶here were mouse̶ mice. H̶e like̶ liked mi̶s̶e̶ mice but his mom do̶s̶e̶n̶"̶t̶ doesn't like mi̶s̶e̶ mice. S̶o William go̶ went to parrot cages. M̶r Gage said̶ William can teach a few words to parrot̶ a parrot. B̶ut William didn't bough̶t̶ buy it again. N̶ext, puppy̶ a puppy choosed̶ chose William t̶hen he bought puppy̶ so he bought the puppy. I̶ think this book is fun.
Grade: C+
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- 단수와 복수를 구분해서 사용하세요 (예: mouse → mice).
- 소유격 사용에 주의하세요 (예: William's hands).
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