Lead: I went to the singing room
Where: I went to the singing room at hongik university
How: I went to the singing room at hongik university with my friends
When: I went to the singing room at hongik university with my friends yesterday
situation : There were lots of people that I didn't see therefore I went to 'fun it' . 'fun it' is very interesting and exciting because there are lots of game that I like games , so I like 'Fun it' . I go to the hongik university this university very big.
result:I go shopping hongik university.
Feeling: I was happy
will: I will go to hongik university next time.
after Revising
I went to the singing room at hongik university with my friends yesterday There were lots of people that I didn't see therefore I went to 'fun it' . 'fun it' is very interesting and exciting because there are lots of game that I like games , so I like 'Fun it' . I go to the hongik university this university very big.I go shopping hongik university. I was happy I will go to hongik university next time.
첫댓글 I went shopping
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