English composition5 homework (Brian)

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Exercise15:

 One day in GLO-ELITE Eliementary school, there were John and Brian. That afternoon after school John and Brian made paper planes. When they were making paper planes,Maw saw that they were making paper planes, he took their planes. Max threw paper plane outside. It flew very well. Then it fell down to the ground. When  John and Brian saw that, they threw their planes outside too. John's paper plane flew 10m. Brian's paper plane flew 11m. All of their planes fell down to the ground. John knew teacher Nheng was coming to them. Also Max knew that school cleaner saw them flying the paper planes. So John, Brian, and Max ran to first floor. They went outside. They said sorry to school cleaner. They all pick their planes. After that excident, they threw nothing.

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Exercise16:

  One day in the GLO-ELITE Elementary school, there were john and sally. they were walking in the school park. They were talking about Max's birthday. They thought about Max's presents. When they were walking, they saw one boy who was picking up some flowers. So they ran to him. They topld him to stop picking flowers. But he didin't care about them. They said many times to stop to pick flowers. Then theacher Varonica asked why they were arguing. John and Sally said that the boy was picking flowers. So they were stoping him. So theacher Varonisa told to boy. "Don't pick up flowers or some other plants. You are killing them. YOu can draw them ar take pictures of them." So the boy started to draw that flowers. He also took pictures of  them. After that day, there was new sign. It say "Don't pick flowers".

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exercise 15

You forgot to include the title but it's great to make your own story.
It's very creative to include names (Brian, John, Max and teacher Nheng) as the characters in your composition.
(ha-ha-ha!)

Look for some spelling mistakes.
*** Eliementary
*** excident

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Exercise 16:

The first letter of the first word in a sentence should be capitalized. (Don't forget that.)
Very creative.
Good story.

Look for some spelling mistakes.
*** Varonica
*** Varonisa
*** theacher
*** didin't